At times the review gets a bit hard to understand, but I like it. It's very even-handed.
I do think though, that in future reviews when people refer to a character they need to be more descriptive. Instead of saying "Mr. Moneybags went to the bank," you would say "top-hatted stereotypical capitalist Mr. Moneybags went to the bank." Or instead of saying "Even Varrsuvius's familiar starts to get development later in the story" (huh?) you would say "Even the strip's gender-ambiguous sorcerer extraordinaire Varrsuvius'…" or something of the sort and move on from there. Don't expect your readers to know the comic before reading your review.
I'm liking the new tone a lot more than I liked the tone at the Bad Webcomics Wiki.